Wednesday, May 14, 2008

Metamorphosis

The cocoon has broken:
Drawn by an unknown urge
the moth readies its wings...
But the windchill stings!
And oh the cocoon's comfort!

9 comments:

Angika said...

Multiple levels, as usual?

sujaan said...

of course...the cocoon is wrapped around several times!

Angika said...

Sheesh. It's useless even trying to give you a compliment! That too becomes a dumb joke!

little boxes said...

nice...economical use of words but hits where it's supposed to.

sridhar said...

write something abt princeton next. not some poem that goes above my head!

sridhar said...

oops. sorry. i meant purdue.

sujaan said...

@sridhar: how did it go over ur head...it's absolutely simple...s

sridhar said...

coz its a poem and its in english and needs me to excercise my brain cells

proma said...

aha! coated with metaphorical meanings. nice!