Z I L C H: Metamorphosis

Wednesday, May 14, 2008

The cocoon has broken:
Drawn by an unknown urge
the moth readies its wings...
But the windchill stings!
And oh the cocoon's comfort!

Angika said...: Multiple levels, as usual?; May 14, 2008 at 9:15 PM
sujaan said...: of course...the cocoon is wrapped around several times!; May 14, 2008 at 10:17 PM
Angika said...: Sheesh. It's useless even trying to give you a compliment! That too becomes a dumb joke!; May 14, 2008 at 10:19 PM
little boxes said...: nice...economical use of words but hits where it's supposed to.; May 14, 2008 at 11:29 PM
sridhar said...: write something abt princeton next. not some poem that goes above my head!; May 25, 2008 at 2:02 AM
sridhar said...: oops. sorry. i meant purdue.; May 25, 2008 at 2:02 AM
sujaan said...: @sridhar: how did it go over ur head...it's absolutely simple...s; May 26, 2008 at 9:05 AM
sridhar said...: coz its a poem and its in english and needs me to excercise my brain cells; May 27, 2008 at 3:04 AM
Pair of brown eyes said...: aha! coated with metaphorical meanings. nice!; July 4, 2008 at 2:38 PM