tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post4458417209646548419..comments2023-04-09T18:04:34.877+05:30Comments on Z I L C H: The Fireflies and NightUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-88162371166121918022009-01-19T23:24:00.000+05:302009-01-19T23:24:00.000+05:30I was reading this poem after many days and these ...I was reading this poem after many days and these four lines seemed to me even more beautiful than when i had read it for the first time.... <BR/><BR/>"They fly about madly<BR/>for a moment of Night's attention.<BR/>The flies have their hearts on fire,<BR/>And their fault is that it shows."Arkarup Banerjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00397863178074520764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-62094551856748668522009-01-18T17:30:00.000+05:302009-01-18T17:30:00.000+05:30Do check out my new poem.PlsDo check out my new poem.PlsDeepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-70690096486717812512009-01-12T23:51:00.000+05:302009-01-12T23:51:00.000+05:30hey..niice...strangly lately i hav wriiten abt fir...hey..niice...strangly lately i hav wriiten abt fireflies as well...reemahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18072549535241299305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-27722227998031956312009-01-04T02:46:00.000+05:302009-01-04T02:46:00.000+05:30It's a pleasure reading your blog...has a lot of s...It's a pleasure reading your blog...has a lot of sensitivity to it.zephyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17464915608073864372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-26044451392365110242008-12-19T17:08:00.000+05:302008-12-19T17:08:00.000+05:30Nice use of personification, I like the mood you h...Nice use of personification, I like the mood you have created, Keep writing :)Inamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05179681869787870521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-69180705946238637602008-12-16T12:30:00.000+05:302008-12-16T12:30:00.000+05:30Chanced upon ur blog.Liked ur work.Do c my poems a...Chanced upon ur blog.Liked ur work.Do c my poems as well on<BR/>www.deepteshpoetry.blogspot.comDeepteshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00369208312465209116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-4381475108222168762008-12-14T18:17:00.000+05:302008-12-14T18:17:00.000+05:30i really like this one...and all the metaphors and...i really like this one...and all the metaphors and analogies you use.little boxeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07011839933124378047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-61674301679904682762008-12-14T15:20:00.000+05:302008-12-14T15:20:00.000+05:30I agree with Angika. In all your poems you draw an...I agree with Angika. In all your poems you draw analogies or personify things so differently...Everytime i read one, it comes to my mind "Mere dimag mein ye baat kabhi nahi aayi".<BR/>Good work Sujaan. Keep writing.Shaziahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02343597076801088512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-40705846678123934922008-12-13T11:05:00.000+05:302008-12-13T11:05:00.000+05:30@ Sujaan: Glad to see that you appreciated it :) B...@ Sujaan: Glad to see that you appreciated it :) But I must say that the USP in all your poetry is the novelty of the concept and the simplicity with which you put your idea across. Like I told you, the picture of Night and Fireflies would never have occurred to me; much less in this perspective. Tres bien :)Angikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194552331692868311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-41709235641864612562008-12-13T01:42:00.000+05:302008-12-13T01:42:00.000+05:30Both the poems are beautiful... They portray diffe...Both the poems are beautiful... They portray different aspects of love...neither more correct than the other.Arkarup Banerjeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00397863178074520764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-63089895515803375482008-12-12T21:28:00.000+05:302008-12-12T21:28:00.000+05:30well, the perspective in my poem was of unrequited...well, the perspective in my poem was of unrequited love....the theme in ur reaction is somewhat different....it's of inability to communicate...but nice point of view....sujaanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07944785835548171381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-30730216034922231092008-12-12T12:15:00.000+05:302008-12-12T12:15:00.000+05:30Playful Fireflies under the firembraced by Night's...Playful Fireflies under the fir<BR/>embraced by Night's darkness;<BR/>Night's stillness sparks them<BR/>fires them yellow and gold<BR/>Warm display of their true love<BR/>rids Night of its cold<BR/>Night has no means<BR/>to show how much she loves<BR/>But she knows that only in her dark clouds and soft shadows<BR/>Their true beauty shows.<BR/><BR/>Fireflies destroy her calm<BR/>With gorgeous, radiant lights<BR/><BR/>Yet Night pines for them<BR/>To burn within her darkness.<BR/>She reaches out to them<BR/>but cannot<BR/>And puts a frosty air instead<BR/>that cries, Leave me alone!<BR/>Yet the Fireflies burn madly<BR/>for a moment of Night's attention<BR/>for they know that when the stars twinkle<BR/>Night's quiet love shows.<BR/>And for eons it shall remain<BR/>That through the night, love grows.<BR/><BR/>P.S. There was a silly typo in the previous comment.Angikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194552331692868311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-931350309994415856.post-49930868701352740112008-12-12T12:00:00.000+05:302008-12-12T12:00:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Angikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194552331692868311noreply@blogger.com